11/7(Learning Journal 6)

Today Miss Chen show us the principle of "How to check the composition?" In my opinion, it is more useful than the checklist written on the material. After checking the academic writing rules, I wrote them on my month schedule book so that I can review it whenever I need them.

I still value that "The piece is engaging and alive."

My friend Ricky(李奇瀚), who had taken this class before, asked me why I am so blue after he read my composition "Why you major your major?". He said he feel sad through my article. I was shocked and confused why he asked this question because I just wanted to tell a joke without any negative emotion. Fortunately, I finally realize that “reader awareness” is important. I reviewed my article again and found that there isn’t any positive words and aspects in the article. I’m sad about the failed joke but glad of finding this problem.