12/7(Learning journal 8 )
This time we learned how to compare two different things and we read the article about two different teachers. I remembered I had wrote this kind of composition before. I compared two teachers and one of them was liked and the other wasn't. To tell the truth, I am not quite like write this kind of article because it is difficult for me to structure well. I like to brainstome and also can come up with a lot of idea, yet I just could't combine them orderly. Therefore, sometime I feel my articles could be seperated by several part. Is that Ok? Is it a bad phenomenon?
This time we learned how to compare two different things and we read the article about two different teachers. I remembered I had wrote this kind of composition before. I compared two teachers and one of them was liked and the other wasn't. To tell the truth, I am not quite like write this kind of article because it is difficult for me to structure well. I like to brainstome and also can come up with a lot of idea, yet I just could't combine them orderly. Therefore, sometime I feel my articles could be seperated by several part. Is that Ok? Is it a bad phenomenon?


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