12/14(Learning journal 9)
To finish the assignment2, The different between living in dorm and home, I asked many friends for their idea. Although I got a lot of fun suggestions, it is really hard to conbine them into an article. Finally I gave up. I write this article two times because I am not satisfied with the first version. My friend also told my that my direction was totally wrong because I wrote " the different between living in dorm and living in rent house." When I heard this, I almost got crazy as I've wrote that article for many hours. Anyway, I still fininsh the assignment patiently.
To finish the assignment2, The different between living in dorm and home, I asked many friends for their idea. Although I got a lot of fun suggestions, it is really hard to conbine them into an article. Finally I gave up. I write this article two times because I am not satisfied with the first version. My friend also told my that my direction was totally wrong because I wrote " the different between living in dorm and living in rent house." When I heard this, I almost got crazy as I've wrote that article for many hours. Anyway, I still fininsh the assignment patiently.


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